Elevator Pitch No. 3

Reflection:

I got some really good feedback from my previous elevator pitch. I specifically thought two points were very constructive and good feedback. One was to make sure my pitched flowed better and the other was to include more detail about the product and how it will work. These are two things that I definitely think helped improve my pitch and I tried to incorporate a little more into this third attempt.

What did you change?

I tried to add more detail about the product and also make sure that the pitch had a better flow to it. These two areas have been the most challenging for me because I don’t have all of the details for the product yet. The flow definitely needed some improvement.